Comments on: Golden Heart Critique Giveaway

By: Rosalind Stone

Rosalind Stone — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 23:16:00 +0000

If I can somehow finagle it, I’d like to enter two manuscipts for GH. The following is from my other GH project:

Genre: YA (Contemporary Fantasy)

Change, like moving water, was a good thing – she had heard that all her life.

By: Tereasa Bellew

Tereasa Bellew — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 11:02:26 +0000

genre- romantic suspense

The squeaky wheels rolling along the cement floor told Carl it was almost noon.

*Thanks so much!

By: Jennieke C

Jennieke C — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 07:35:26 +0000

Genre: Historical YA

Had Victoria Aston known when she awoke that in a few short hours she would be crouching behind the prickliest bramble bush in Hampshire, mud-splattered and tear-stained, she might have decided to sleep through breakfast.

(Thanks so much to both of you for this opportunity!)

By: Rosalind Stone

Rosalind Stone — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 02:15:31 +0000

Genre: YA (with hint of magical realism)

My eyes weld shut and I drop down beside her huddled body.

–
Angela and Donor – thank you both for this opportunity.
Also, good luck to all entering GH!

By: Kathy Sullivan

Kathy Sullivan — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 19:49:35 +0000

Genre: Romantic Suspense

I should have locked the door.

(What a kind and thoughtful gesture on the anon. donor’s part and your willingness to share your expertise.)

By: Cynthia Justlin

Cynthia Justlin — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 18:53:57 +0000

Genre: Dark thriller with romantic elements

I stopped caring 368 scratch marks ago, but something compels me to keep track of the days.

Thanks so much–to both you and the generous donor!

By: Cate Hart

Cate Hart — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 14:13:18 +0000

Genre : YA Paranormal

All around the small, dingy office I stepped into, stacks of loose papers, file folders, and pamphlets threatened to topple to the floor.

Thanks for the opportunity Angela and anonymous donator. And Good Luck to all the entrants, both here and in the GH.

By: Ami Weaver

Ami Weaver — Wed, 28 Oct 2009 16:19:23 +0000

Genre: Series Contemporary

The stick was pink.

Thank you (both of you) for this opportunity!

By: Martha W

Martha W — Wed, 28 Oct 2009 02:34:55 +0000

My fingers were too fast on the submit button – I also meant to say thank you to whomever donated the fee, for the opportunity and the gesture. Even if I don’t win this particular contest, I think I will ‘pay it forward’ anyway. What a great way to make someone’s day.

By: Martha W

Martha W — Wed, 28 Oct 2009 02:33:07 +0000

Genre: Paranormal Romance

Here our line in its finest hour; Will meet darkness in all his power.