Sorry I didn’t get to this yesterday. I decided to go ahead and let Random.org choose my winner, because I just couldn’t decide from so many good first lines. I wish I was seeing some of these entries!
But since there can be only one… Suzanne Lazear, you can thank our anonymous benefactor for your free critique of this entry:
genre: steampunk YA
Whatever happened, she could not allow them to catch her and not a single drop of her blood could spill upon the ground.
Congratulations! You have until Sunday, November 8th to send your entry to me (DOC or RTF format) to angelajameseditor AT gmail.com
Good luck to everyone entering the Golden Hearts!