October 27, 2018

Before You Hit Send All-Day Workshop
MORWA chapter, St. Louis, MO.
An all-day presentation of BYHS.
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In addition to the workshops listed below, workshops can be designed and tailored specifically for your writing group.

Book me for your writer’s group!

Interested in having me come out to your writer’s group or RWA chapter to present an all-day version of Before You Hit Send?
Email me for details at angelajameseditor AT

Here’s an overview of what you can expect from the all-day workshop:

All-Day Master Class: Before You Hit Send: A Hands-on Self-Editing Course

(All day, PowerPoint needed. There is an additional charge for this course, set at a per-person charge, or a charge with a maximum attendance cap. Please ask for more details if you’re interested in this workshop)

**Note, this class can be offered in a super-condensed 2 to 3-hour version

This is the condensed version of Angela’s 5-week online self-editing workshop. The workshop runs from 9:00 a.m.-4:30 p.m., with a very short morning and afternoon break, and a one-hour break for lunch. Topics cover everything from the basics of self-editing (punctuation, grammar, adverb/adjective use) to the more advanced topics of pacing, passive voice, overwriting and much, much more!

Learn to self-edit and polish your manuscript in this all-day workshop presented by a Carina Press Editorial Director, Angela James.

What you will learn:

Develop a checklist of techniques and processes for enhancing self-editing skills and polishing future manuscripts. Learn how to make the new knowledge a habit when writing future books. Learn the basics and the advanced techniques of:

  • Dialogue and dialogue tags
  • Whether all forms of “to be” are really evil (the answer is no)
  • What is overwriting? How can you avoid it?
  • Basic and advanced punctuation
  • Passive voice vs active voice
  • Point of view
  • Pacing, including and editing trick to help you “fix” pacing
  • What we mean by show not tell. And how to do that!
  • Different types of editing and stages of editing
  • What to look for in an editorial relationship
  • What to look for and questions to ask when hiring a freelance editor
  • Formalizing and finalizing your manuscript before you hit send (or press publish)
I am also available to writer’s groups and RWA chapters to present the following workshops:

Your Copy Editor Is Not Your Proofreader: Understanding Editor Roles & How to Hire the Right One

(90 minutes, PowerPoint needed)

The editing process is one that can feel mysterious and complicated to those who don’t have a lot of experience with it (and even to those who do). In this workshop, Angela James will explain why your copy editor is not your proofreader and take you through the different stages of editing, the different types of editors, and why each can play an important role in the development of your book. In addition, she’ll give tips and tricks on finding the best editor, questions to ask before hiring your own, and some suggestions for what to expect when working with an editor, whether one you’ve hired or the one who acquired your book at a publisher.

Small Group Critique Workshop

(3-4 hours, limited to a maximum of 8 participants. No PowerPoint needed. Attendees must submit a 2-3 paragraph story overview and three chapters of their WIP 1 month-2 weeks before the workshop, for both the group and Angela to review in advance. Some organizations charge participants a flat rate participation fee for this critique group as a means of raising money for the chapter/group)

This workshop is an opportunity for authors to solicit professional and peer feedback on their manuscript, in real time, in a helpful, constructive and kind environment. We’ll discuss overall story arcs, the all-important “hook,” pacing, characterization and tension (among many others). Attendees are given marked-up manuscript pages to take with them when they go.

Candid Cold Reads

(1-2 hours, 2 copies of manuscript pages needed, as well as a “reader” to read them)

Bring the first two pages of your manuscript, your nerves of steel and your sense of humor, then listen as Angela or Kerri provides insight into live reviewing this mock “slush” pile. You’ll hear why agents and editors stop reading, what they’re looking for in a submission, and some of the common mistakes they see as they go through their slush pile. Come to listen or come to get critiqued, but join Angela or Kerri to discuss and review the slush pile you provide.

Finding Your Way to the Pacing Sweet Spot

(90 minutes, PowerPoint needed)

Better understand what editors and agents mean when they reference a book’s pacing. Learn what to look for in your own manuscript when it comes to figuring out pacing, structure and how to make it all work together.


(30-60 minutes, no PowerPoint needed)

Give your attendees a chance to ask questions of a long-time industry professional. An informal Q&A about the industry, publishing, working with a publisher, insight into Harlequin and Carina Press and whatever your attendees are interested in!

Building Your Brand

(90 minutes, PowerPoint needed, *note, this and the following workshop go together and work well as a set for 3 hours, but either can be done individually, though that’s not optimal)

How many times has someone told you to build your brand, but not told you what that means? You think it might mean something about a tagline, or your website header, but in reality, building your brand is an important, and sometimes complex, endeavor. One that can start right before you ever publish a book and continue throughout your career. In this workshop, learn what constitutes author brand, how it can support your career plan, why it’s important, how you can get one, and some things you should avoid.

Building Your Brand, Part II: Using Your Website to Support Your Brand

(90 minutes, PowerPoint needed)

As an author, you’re told you should have both a website and a brand. In this workshop, discuss how the two should work together, and how you can use your website to support your brand. Learn via actual visual examples things to avoid and things to consider when setting up and maintaining your website.

Have a topic you want an editor or publishing professional to speak to your group about? As an experienced speaker, Angela can develop a workshop at your request!

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